SabreSpace new logo sketch...

[JujuFish]

The slash above SabreSpace doesn't show up behind the second S.

[SDS]

The slash above SabreSpace doesn't show up behind the second S.

 

I don't know what this means.

[R_Dudley]

Defintely the bottom SabreSpace however the second 'S'pace does not appear quite the same as the first 'S'abre ( 1st appears to be more of an S on the move). I think both S's should look like the first.

[shoveldog]

I don't know what this means.

 

Look at the second "S", the swoosh line up top behind it should have a bottom line behind the trailing tail at the top of the "S". Hope that makes sense.

[LeopoldFan3]

I got the reference right away too. I really like the logo! My only comment is to straghten out the letters a little more. The 'PACE' letters seem a little a squished.

 

As a designer myself, nice work!

[ThePebble19]

Bottom one. Very nice work.

[Two or less]

Bottom one.

 

Great job, SDS!

[SDS]

 

Closing in...

[shrader]

Next step, color... but obviously that's in the plans.

[SDS]

Next step, color... but obviously that's in the plans.

 

we have exited the sketch phase and are now moving to Adobe Illustrator. We just wanted the basic form down. I'm much more comfortable now than I was previously with it.

[Taro T]

 

Closing in...

Scott,

 

It looks very sharp. The only 2 tweaks I'd suggest would be to have the letters in Sabre (ABRE) curve slightly along the curves above and below them; and slide the gap in the lower curve to the right to fit the 2nd 'S'. (My guess is you already planned to do that; if so, then as Emily used to say 'never mind.')

 

:beer:

[wjag]

Looks nice, Am I the only one who sees SABRES PACE? :doh:

[Ghost of Dwight Drane]

For some reason, I suddenly have a hankering for a burger from Burger King circa 1981.

[X. Benedict]

For some reason, I suddenly have a hankering for a burger from Burger King circa 1981.

 

Hold the pickles, Hold the lettuce, special orders won't upset us.....

[Ghost of Dwight Drane]

Hold the pickles, Hold the lettuce, special orders won't upset us.....

 

Sound's like Derek Roy's kinda place.

[SDS]

almost there...

 

[X. Benedict]

almost there...

 

That's looking good.

[spndnchz]

FWIW, IMHO, those little tails on the S's remind me too much of the slug toupee, or something else I won't get into.

[SDS]

FWIW, IMHO, those little tails on the S's remind me too much of the slug toupee, or something else I won't get into.

 

so, do you think they should end in sharp points like a few of those on the "B"?

[Taro T]

almost there...

 

Overall it looks good.

 

I'd probably adjust the tilt on the right side of the 1st 'A', or adjust the tilt on sides of the 'BRE'. I like the curve to the tops/bottoms of the 1st letters; and like that they seem to straighten out on 'PACE'.

 

Also, although the 2nd 'S' looks good, I liked the way how it was a little larger before and cut into the lower underline.

 

I like trimming the top line back to just covering the 'ABRE'.

 

Your artist does good work. :thumbsup:

[spndnchz]

so, do you think they should end in sharp points like a few of those on the "B"?

 

I don't think I have an answer here.

[darksabre]

In the words of Enrique, Baby, I like it.

[shrader]

Ahhh, color. It does wonders here.

[frisky]

Looks pretty good overall. I like a little more color though like gold somewhere. Possibly silver outlining?